I shouldn't be trying new stuff mid series, but here we go. Alternating character dialogue instead of having it be all split into sections. Swapping nearly every line is probably overdoing it a bit though, but I think it worked out mostly ok.
Normally I have a pan up/down on character change so you can tell who it is when it's all zoomed in, but now I guess you'll have to go off who's talking instead.
Is there too many "Nya~"'s? It doesn't really feel like a Rin line without a nya, but I probably just suck at writing too.
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