Change the discord link, Really good first joi UmU

Yay Megumin, long time since I've seen just Megumin

Really good. If I were to give some advice it's just to be slightly longer. (Keep the larger text boxes on screen for longer, longer distance from the split route to the end to make for a slightly more polished end, and the video in general (though this one is largely dependent on you I personally like 15-20 minutes))
I thought this is really good and I can't wait to see what else you make.

Good joi. But you need to replace the discord link. User links are broken just tell us your username

my criticism is that I don't like ai art and there's plenty of nice pictures of Megumin

Make the text boxes stay on the screen longer

I really loved it, as other users said keep the larger text boxes longer.
Also as a suggerence use more pictures that last less and maybe some video.
Keep the good work!