Taking your younger classmate's virginity! [Edging] [Defloration] [Undressing] [Teasing] [Countdown] [Hololive] [Sakamata Chloe] [Sex]
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Hi! I'm Melon and this is my first JOI video!
I am really into VNs, so I thought it'd be a cool experiment to try and combine VNs and JOI together, and this is what came out!
It's a bit longer due to having an introduction (the VN element). I hope you watch the full video but if you just wanna get to the action here are the timestamps!
JOI Soft Start: 6:35 (This skips half the prologue)
JOI Start: 11:11 (This skips the whole prologue)
Sex scene: 22:00
If you end up liking it (or not), consider joining my Discord and leaving some feedback there!
Of course if you don't feel like joining the discord, you're always welcome to DM personally or leave comments here or in the video page.
I'm already planning out my next video. Also, if you enjoyed this be on the lookout for a part 2!
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MelonJOI
2 years ago
Timestamps!
JOI Soft Start: 6:35 (This skips half the prologue)
JOI Start: 11:11 (This skips the whole prologue)
Sex scene: 22:00
You can watch the continuation of this video here: https://www.the-joi-database.com/watch/9cc3e95f483a7c4d895a0969
pyroboomer
2 years ago
very well done! i love the JOIs with some depth to them in the way of a good story and healthy amount of teasing. unfortunately the squishing sounds killed it for me toward the end. thats not a critique of your video though. i know im likely in the minority with a strong distaste for ASMR. i still watched to the end and enjoyed it though. the only thing id say may need changing is the timing for text on screen. i had to rewind so many times. (youre tellin a story after all, amirite?) i look forward to next installment!
EDIT: what is "VN"?
MelonJOI
2 years ago
I appreciate your feedback! :) You're the first person do give criticism and I'm so happy for that!
I'll be sure to do better in my next video and consider your tips.
VN stands for Visual Novel, a genre of videogame.
pyroboomer
2 years ago
im happy to help! keep in mind, my aversion to the squishing sounds and asmr-y stuff aside, the audio you used was great. very immersive and tastefully done. i cant wait to see more from you!
MelonJOI
2 years ago
Thank you! I promise I will make an even better video next month!
Nissiano
2 years ago
Awesome joi. Loved the concept of ‘daydreaming’ as well as the actually pretty decent storytelling. The attention to detail with thunder going off in the background was also super cool. The one thing I can say is that some images flash by too quick for my liking. Overall, great job, especially for a first joi.
MelonJOI
2 years ago
Thank you so much for your feedback.
I'm glad you noticed that! I wondered if that was bit too subtle.
Could you tell me which images specifically you thought were too quick? Or maybe not all of them but an example or two would be great to pinpoint exactly what I could improve upon.
Thanks!
Nissiano
2 years ago
15:30-16:45 ish section, as well as right after the climax. But honestly, after watching a second time, and not being dead tired while doing unlike last time, I think the quick transitions are fine. Looking forward to your next vid!
MelonJOI
2 years ago
Got it. I'll take that into account!
Promise the next vid will be better! Thanks for your support!
WatchHololive
2 years ago
I'll always be down for a little femdom or sissification but sometime vanilla is just where it's at, and I have to say this is one of the best JOI's I've encountered everything just seems so perfect, so great job and a brilliant first JOI, good day my friend and I hope to see more greatness in the future.
MelonJOI
2 years ago
Thank you! I really appreciate your kind words!
Be on the lookout for my next video! Great day to you too!
RFG
2 years ago
Every new vtuber joi is a blessing. This is nicely done. Simple vanilla stuff like this is kinda rare nowadays so this video is much appreciated. Also, Chloe is cute.
MelonJOI
2 years ago
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Tuihhjs
2 years ago
I created an account just to thank you, this work was amazing!
MelonJOI
2 years ago
Thank you so much for your kind words!
idwjwiu
9 months ago
pretty good tbh
MelonJOI
9 months ago
Thank you. I made a voiced version of this video a few months ago. I think it's even better!