Mastorbatorium (Work in progress) first level (done) (need opinions before continue if posible, thanks)

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Well this is the first preview video of my lastest proyect. It include what you already saw in the trailer + the "first level" of the JOI.
i need you help to tell me if i'm going in the good direction, and if my english granmar it's good enough or if i should find a proofreader before the final release.

i recommend watching this video before you watch another (this version finish with and Edge hold). so you may want to have a second video to finish after watch this.

however it will be really good if can comment something relative to the video, if you like the transitions, the position of the words, if it get's repetitive because i lacks of enough english compression etc...

this will be the last "preview" before the final product, so anything that you want to say this is the moment.


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